very excited for this! concept it very strong and characters look incredible. I also love the comic chibi artstyle type interludes, it makes it a lot more compelling for me. keep up the awesome work (:
I love this concept but i think there has to be a little bit more build up instead of the person getting the sex pass and immediately having sex afterwards
Neat concept! I'd love to see a basic relationship system in there to change the sex scenes between more intimate vs perfunctory/casual - like for example, actually praising Diana's work ethic to get her body vs just thinking it as happened already.
It's got a lot of potential, and probably a very tricky balance to strike between tons of girls to knock up and sprawling out the project with way too many potential routes and endings. Keep it up!
Love the concept! Are you planning a route system or will it be linear? Also some interaction would be fun like sending the requests, viewing their profile maybe a free playish mode during sex? Still great stuff love the public aspect too!
For a taste of what's to come, I do like how it starts. Makes me wonder how things will play out if Jake is somehow, the top 1% guy who manages to successfully re-populate his area. Or if he's just going to let this blow over and continue with his life outside of the system encouraging what could be considered degeneracy. The kind of thing that lets us know how Jake would handle things based on our choices. I do like the idea of Jake having choices with who to try it with and who not to whether it's a matter of preference, chance, or needing money right that second. I do hope you work out a good branching system based on the choices that let us know what kind of guy Jake is and how the choices made better inform how he responds. Like how his first encounter almost ended in failure and that maybe there's another chance at Diana if he works on himself to better perform. Even if she herself is very hot headed, maybe he can work his way into her heart and things get serious. Or perhaps Jake is just an opportunist who sees money or fun in the whole program. No idea how things will play out but I do think it's a good premise.
La historia tiene mucho potencial, parece interesante, solo espero que el metodo de juego sea entretenido y inmersivo, que no sea otra novela visual del monton
I like the fantasy and the artstyle. Would prefer a more sandbox-y approach to a full on visual novel, though, maybe with minigames and/or resource management aspects
+1 on this, the sandbox aspect would give some kind a light thrill to pass or fail some actions. Beside this, the plot and art are very good so far, keep up the good work :)
Really like the Character Design. Cool Concept but could be boring after a while if it would be just like this. also nice that the MC doesn't seem to be the typical Notgeiler Loser/Douche.
reminds me of "welcome to breeding city" but a bit more realistic, i like the fact that even dou the girls are in the program, they are not fucking on the middle of the street, but maybe that can be added, when the story progress, the people become more bold as an advertisement of the program
Fun Plot, like the idea of it being a semi open world design where you exist in a bunch of hub worlds and get to choose to "date" the different girls, use the money to buy more stuff for interesting sex scenes and use maybe some dating game mechanics to unlock specific scenarios? (ferris wheel sex, threesomes, gangbangs, bondage, pet play) with more intense kinks being locked behind building relationships with the different girls.
It's an odd premise but I've seen this kind of story before and it can be done well.
Playing the demo was fun albeit a bit short, but it was amusing and I appreciated the mc was not a hyper-horny fool, he was not blind to how attractive the first client was, but also under pressure and not a super confident sex god who did his fist "job" to perfection on the first try.
This is fun and I would like to see more, as long as the character interactions remain interesting and things get nicely more complex over time.
Hmm, the visual novel is fine, but I have a thought: what if this visual novel will focus on both Kat's and Jake's perspectives, using either of the sex pass to have sex with strangers, with Jake having sex with some women from the sex pass while Kat tries to interact and have sex with males until the last half Kat and Jake meet, have sex, and admit their love for each other, becoming the right couple.
Also, what if you make a similar visual novel like this one, but it involves a voluntary male and female, both naked, to have sex with strangers to relieve their stress until they meet each other and have sex with each other? Maybe it has an exhibitionism and sex theme, perhaps with a brothel setting but with everyone naked.
Also what if you make lesbian exhibitionism visual novel game between a milf and a college girl who were doing exhibitionism naked together and have lesbian sex
And what if there were a female-only fighting game but with a nudist or strip theme?
I think this is a really cool idea for a VN. I also liked the pay discrepancy since the women have to run the risk of getting pregnant whenever they say yes. The men only have to pump and dump. I think it would be a good idea to be able to increase your pay based on how popular you are and how likely you are to get women pregnant naturally, and so on. Doing things to stay healthy can increase your pay if you're consistent.
Poor Jake. Also, I fear this story will lean into NTR subject matters once women like Madison get added. I would also like to see Jake get paid equally for his hard work. $20-60 is okay but nothing compared to $600 j
It does suck that the imo the hottest of all the women is the one who is in the NTR path. Like why is Madison in the program? She is in a committed relationship. One can obviously think of reasons she wouldn't want to be with Jake's brother and get impregnated by someone else, and I don't think I'll enjoy any of them.
However, it makes sense that Jake gets less money since as another user pointed our, men can just pump and dump and see many partners with no risk of pregnancy while once a woman is pregnant she is out of the system she is no longer earning.
i feel like instead of a vn this would have insane potential to be a sort of simulation game where you can have sex with different women using minigames or something and use the money you gain to buff stats to get better at sex and raise the time limit
The story is a premise used in other games, but it lacks a lot of factors I would need for buy in. (Though I do very much appreciate that everyone is a willing participant in this game, as others are very non consensual)
- Our main character's life sucks, but somehow thinks this app is a pain, and not the greatest thing to ever happen to him? While I enjoy the twist because him being happy is how other games would handle this topic, there is not enough reason given for why he would feel antagonistic about the app at first. Perhaps it is explained that the app will fine him for not accepting requests, or there is a quota that must be reached? Things that would complicate the situation. To motivate him, perhaps there is a massive bonus for completing the beta test, life changing money if he can just survive the beta test?
- The current process is slow, ok I can buy that, but why is our main character on the beta list? There are likely thousands of people who would be WILLING to do this, so why him?The classic answer is the government cares less about quality and more about results. He is genetically more virile, so they want him on the job rather than other men. Which also makes him counter productive to the women who just want the money and not to actually get pregnant. Which helps explain a lot of the hostility towards him present in the story.
- Why is there a time limit and how does the app even know? ( Minor things because this is fantasy, but I was just asking myself these questions the whole time. ) It seems trivial to just not accept the invite and wait to move to a better location. Perhaps have the government send the invite for them, and both must accept within a time limit or the offer vanishes. This would put them on a timer and force hasty and risky decisions and would make sense as the government only cares about boosting the birth rate, not their convenience.
- some of the writing felt awkward at some points, but this is a demo, so that is fine.
- this is advertised as a visual novel, and not a kinetic novel, so the lack of player input or choice threw me off. Choosing to agree on the app seems like the logical option, especially if paired with a quote that must be hit or game over.
Overall, I enjoyed previous games, and look forward to seeing where this one goes.
the premise is interesting, but i dont like the way the programm and his interaction is introdouced. Meybe have him subscribe after seeing an app. hes bored after all he might go withit. then let a lady near him take advantage of his low score and her high score to make som money and just drop him. (you can reintrodouce her later when hes actually gonna be a daddy for some dramapoints XD)
after that you can send him out on his own volition.
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I really liked it! neat idea for a long game if youre down for that
I love this as a concept, I feel like it would be a good fit for a sandbox/simulation game
Great idea, love this
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very excited for this! concept it very strong and characters look incredible. I also love the comic chibi artstyle type interludes, it makes it a lot more compelling for me. keep up the awesome work (:
it was pretty good tbh i liked it, it was nice, simple and the whole concept was good you should really make the full story of it
Honestly, great concept and the artwork already looks stunning, even while unfinished. Really looking forward to this one.
is this a humiliation thing? I feel a little bad for the protagonist
Great Concept ! It goes maybe a tad bit fast, but what else can you expect from this kind of demo. As a proof of concept, i'd say it's really great.
I love this concept but i think there has to be a little bit more build up instead of the person getting the sex pass and immediately having sex afterwards
Neat concept! I'd love to see a basic relationship system in there to change the sex scenes between more intimate vs perfunctory/casual - like for example, actually praising Diana's work ethic to get her body vs just thinking it as happened already.
It's got a lot of potential, and probably a very tricky balance to strike between tons of girls to knock up and sprawling out the project with way too many potential routes and endings. Keep it up!
I would absolutely play a full game based on this concept, tho I hope there will be more things that make this more of a game than just a comic
bro can make a comic instead or whatever u want this is gold
Love it would love to see more
Love it
love it, please keep it going, would love a couple gameplay elements but the story is very interesting
Love the concept! Are you planning a route system or will it be linear? Also some interaction would be fun like sending the requests, viewing their profile maybe a free playish mode during sex? Still great stuff love the public aspect too!
For a taste of what's to come, I do like how it starts. Makes me wonder how things will play out if Jake is somehow, the top 1% guy who manages to successfully re-populate his area. Or if he's just going to let this blow over and continue with his life outside of the system encouraging what could be considered degeneracy. The kind of thing that lets us know how Jake would handle things based on our choices. I do like the idea of Jake having choices with who to try it with and who not to whether it's a matter of preference, chance, or needing money right that second. I do hope you work out a good branching system based on the choices that let us know what kind of guy Jake is and how the choices made better inform how he responds. Like how his first encounter almost ended in failure and that maybe there's another chance at Diana if he works on himself to better perform. Even if she herself is very hot headed, maybe he can work his way into her heart and things get serious. Or perhaps Jake is just an opportunist who sees money or fun in the whole program. No idea how things will play out but I do think it's a good premise.
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I absolutely love it, I can't wait to see more content. I think I could give more objective feedback in a possible future update.
this is a fantastic game concept, and the girls are very beautiful!
i would love to see more girls added into the game, and can we see more sexy scenes with Diana, the strong gym girl?
thank you!
La historia tiene mucho potencial, parece interesante, solo espero que el metodo de juego sea entretenido y inmersivo, que no sea otra novela visual del monton
I like the fantasy and the artstyle. Would prefer a more sandbox-y approach to a full on visual novel, though, maybe with minigames and/or resource management aspects
+1 on this, the sandbox aspect would give some kind a light thrill to pass or fail some actions. Beside this, the plot and art are very good so far, keep up the good work :)
interesting concept has potential
great concept! i love that the characters seem to have personality instead of only having mindless sex
Really like the Character Design.
Cool Concept but could be boring after a while if it would be just like this.
also nice that the MC doesn't seem to be the typical Notgeiler Loser/Douche.
reminds me of "welcome to breeding city" but a bit more realistic, i like the fact that even dou the girls are in the program, they are not fucking on the middle of the street, but maybe that can be added, when the story progress, the people become more bold as an advertisement of the program
I really like the story! Would love if you lean very much in the "public sex" direction
Fun Plot, like the idea of it being a semi open world design where you exist in a bunch of hub worlds and get to choose to "date" the different girls, use the money to buy more stuff for interesting sex scenes and use maybe some dating game mechanics to unlock specific scenarios? (ferris wheel sex, threesomes, gangbangs, bondage, pet play) with more intense kinks being locked behind building relationships with the different girls.
Will play this in the future!
Pretty good idea !
It's an odd premise but I've seen this kind of story before and it can be done well.
Playing the demo was fun albeit a bit short, but it was amusing and I appreciated the mc was not a hyper-horny fool, he was not blind to how attractive the first client was, but also under pressure and not a super confident sex god who did his fist "job" to perfection on the first try.
This is fun and I would like to see more, as long as the character interactions remain interesting and things get nicely more complex over time.
Hmm, the visual novel is fine, but I have a thought: what if this visual novel will focus on both Kat's and Jake's perspectives, using either of the sex pass to have sex with strangers, with Jake having sex with some women from the sex pass while Kat tries to interact and have sex with males until the last half Kat and Jake meet, have sex, and admit their love for each other, becoming the right couple.
Also, what if you make a similar visual novel like this one, but it involves a voluntary male and female, both naked, to have sex with strangers to relieve their stress until they meet each other and have sex with each other? Maybe it has an exhibitionism and sex theme, perhaps with a brothel setting but with everyone naked.
Also what if you make lesbian exhibitionism visual novel game between a milf and a college girl who were doing exhibitionism naked together and have lesbian sex
And what if there were a female-only fighting game but with a nudist or strip theme?
I think this is a really cool idea for a VN. I also liked the pay discrepancy since the women have to run the risk of getting pregnant whenever they say yes. The men only have to pump and dump. I think it would be a good idea to be able to increase your pay based on how popular you are and how likely you are to get women pregnant naturally, and so on. Doing things to stay healthy can increase your pay if you're consistent.
Nice idea
Poor Jake. Also, I fear this story will lean into NTR subject matters once women like Madison get added. I would also like to see Jake get paid equally for his hard work. $20-60 is okay but nothing compared to $600 j
It does suck that the imo the hottest of all the women is the one who is in the NTR path. Like why is Madison in the program? She is in a committed relationship. One can obviously think of reasons she wouldn't want to be with Jake's brother and get impregnated by someone else, and I don't think I'll enjoy any of them.
However, it makes sense that Jake gets less money since as another user pointed our, men can just pump and dump and see many partners with no risk of pregnancy while once a woman is pregnant she is out of the system she is no longer earning.
i feel like instead of a vn this would have insane potential to be a sort of simulation game where you can have sex with different women using minigames or something and use the money you gain to buff stats to get better at sex and raise the time limit
The story is a premise used in other games, but it lacks a lot of factors I would need for buy in. (Though I do very much appreciate that everyone is a willing participant in this game, as others are very non consensual)
- Our main character's life sucks, but somehow thinks this app is a pain, and not the greatest thing to ever happen to him? While I enjoy the twist because him being happy is how other games would handle this topic, there is not enough reason given for why he would feel antagonistic about the app at first. Perhaps it is explained that the app will fine him for not accepting requests, or there is a quota that must be reached? Things that would complicate the situation. To motivate him, perhaps there is a massive bonus for completing the beta test, life changing money if he can just survive the beta test?
- The current process is slow, ok I can buy that, but why is our main character on the beta list? There are likely thousands of people who would be WILLING to do this, so why him?The classic answer is the government cares less about quality and more about results. He is genetically more virile, so they want him on the job rather than other men. Which also makes him counter productive to the women who just want the money and not to actually get pregnant. Which helps explain a lot of the hostility towards him present in the story.
- Why is there a time limit and how does the app even know? ( Minor things because this is fantasy, but I was just asking myself these questions the whole time. ) It seems trivial to just not accept the invite and wait to move to a better location. Perhaps have the government send the invite for them, and both must accept within a time limit or the offer vanishes. This would put them on a timer and force hasty and risky decisions and would make sense as the government only cares about boosting the birth rate, not their convenience.
- some of the writing felt awkward at some points, but this is a demo, so that is fine.
- this is advertised as a visual novel, and not a kinetic novel, so the lack of player input or choice threw me off. Choosing to agree on the app seems like the logical option, especially if paired with a quote that must be hit or game over.
Overall, I enjoyed previous games, and look forward to seeing where this one goes.
I like the artstyle and women
the premise is interesting, but i dont like the way the programm and his interaction is introdouced. Meybe have him subscribe after seeing an app. hes bored after all he might go withit. then let a lady near him take advantage of his low score and her high score to make som money and just drop him. (you can reintrodouce her later when hes actually gonna be a daddy for some dramapoints XD)
after that you can send him out on his own volition.
just rambling thou ignor me ;b
Looks like fun
I like the concept