Oh you’ve added colour! It’s starting to look great I can’t wait for more updates the art is very pretty this has a lot of potential.

Hey! I’m actually a big fan of this concept. I like the simplistic art style approach. I’m thinking that there could already be a couple tweaks to the writing which will allow yourself to set up “plot points” or storylines. If you’re serious about this game I wouldn’t mind trying to contact you further about writing changes or how to progress the story. I might be overstepping if you already have an idea of how you’d like things to go.

One more point I’d like to add, I think that the comments are suggesting some good ideas. The sandbox VNs dominate this space due to them being more interactive and I definitely think that this VN would benefit from this if that’s something you’ve considered.

-M

It's interesting concept for sure.

with how many visual novels out there that are interactive. I forget that they cant be. me like tho but then again I'm as simple as they come.

I really like the what you've done so far, and I'm really excited to see where it's heading!

Really awesome concept! Really hope you continue, its gorgeous!

In case someone was wondering, the download and browser versions are the same right now.  Nice concept though.

Nice VN, should go further, i see future in it, unfortunately i dont have the money to donate and support but if i had it i would donate.

It was interesting. I agree with the person who suggested a sandbox style rather than a narrative. That’s a lot more difficult to make, though. You would have to have something like a day/night schedule and Jake would have regular tasks he does (like go to work) and sometimes his app triggers. Then, he’d have the choice whether or not to match with them, with increasingly bizarre scenarios as he gets higher in rank.

Any chance of making the game from a reverse perspective? I would love to play as a woman who’s willing to entertain the idea of sex with total strangers, using the app as an excuse or as a crutch for her syness.

Not sure if you care, but you’ve got a few typos in the demo. Nice work, though.

Genuinely really love the premise, would pay to see more of this really good art

no se siente como nada que haya jugado antes es bastante interesante, pagaria por ello sinceramente, si me gusto, un gran inicio, explicación rápida y buena.

Very good start to this game, I love the concept and especially enjoy that not every character acts like they're in a porno or doujin. Can't wait to see what comes next!

Maybe go for more of a sandbox? This was good though. Will watch.

love the initial concept and this is a great start. Should have Candace guest star in it!

this is amazing

this was cool. I would definitely play a visual novel type game like this. very interesting ive got nothing negative to say about it

Nice game so far very good foundation good start to introduce it and set rules clearly at the beginning with the player character being not over the top and more realistic with Kat being quite a grounded character and good method for pushing the player character in the gym  where the interaction is with multiple good reasons behind it and the first interaction showing how the sex pass is new and unknown with the motives behind why they are there are understandable in the scene it wasn't that bad and more good was the interruption but a bit ofbad is that since it is late out why would those characters walk into the bathroom when they didnt want to use the bathroom and more be careful of the trap where writers think bringing it to a slim margin is tense but for tension there should be a risk of failing or a smaller victory if not then it won't be tense this is my review of sex pass while it is in early development

-- good idea of a game nice introduction nice characters almost everything was good but bad tension at the end  -Zovolian

intriguing concept, would be cool to see more

this is actually good, we need more content tbh

would definitely play the full game. good concept

Yeah dig this, would def play 

good concept, would purchase

i really liked the concept, also the opportunity to have public sex seems great, but i beg that you dont add anything NTR or cheating related. if you do, then please put a warning or an option to block it out. apart from that, id love to play the full release!

I'd say stick to the concept so far! I like the vision this game's going for and the dialogue's fun as ever :]

amazing

The story seems ok, the jump to action tho a bit to fast. I like the design of the characters.

Seems like a very fun concept. Hope to see more!

great

big hype for this, loved your previous work

Excellent concept! would love to play more of this

i like this concept! you should continue. and your art is great, even if its just sketches rn

Love the concept. Keep up the good work!!

Cool Concept! Hope to See more of it :)

I'm loving this! Please keep it going.

I think this i a great idea! keep at it please!