I love this concept but i think there has to be a little bit more build up instead of the person getting the sex pass and immediately having sex afterwards

Neat concept! I'd love to see a basic relationship system in there to change the sex scenes between more intimate vs perfunctory/casual - like for example, actually praising Diana's work ethic to get her body vs just thinking it as happened already.

It's got a lot of potential, and probably a very tricky balance to strike between tons of girls to knock up and sprawling out the project with way too many potential routes and endings. Keep it up!

I would absolutely play a full game based on this concept, tho I hope there will be more things that make this more of a game than just a comic

bro can make a comic instead or whatever u want this is gold

Love it would love to see more

Love it

love it, please keep it going, would love a couple gameplay elements but the story is very interesting

Love the concept! Are you planning a route system or will it be linear? Also some interaction would be fun like sending the requests, viewing their profile maybe a free playish mode during sex? Still great stuff love the public aspect too!

For a taste of what's to come, I do like how it starts. Makes me wonder how things will play out if Jake is somehow, the top 1% guy who manages to successfully re-populate his area. Or if he's just going to let this blow over and continue with his life outside of the system encouraging what could be considered degeneracy. The kind of thing that lets us know how Jake would handle things based on our choices. I do like the idea of Jake having choices with who to try it with and who not to whether it's a matter of preference, chance, or needing money right that second. I do hope you work out a good branching system based on the choices that let us know what kind of guy Jake is and how the choices made better inform how he responds. Like how his first encounter almost ended in failure and that maybe there's another chance at Diana if he works on himself to better perform. Even if she herself is very hot headed, maybe he can work his way into her heart and things get serious. Or perhaps Jake is just an opportunist who sees money or fun in the whole program. No idea how things will play out but I do think it's a good premise.

I absolutely love it, I can't wait to see more content. I think I could give more objective feedback in a possible future update.

this is a fantastic game concept, and the girls are very beautiful!

i would love to see more girls added into the game, and can we see more sexy scenes with Diana, the strong gym girl?

thank you!

La historia tiene mucho potencial, parece interesante, solo espero que el metodo de juego sea entretenido y inmersivo, que no sea otra novela visual del monton

interesting concept has potential

great concept! i love that the characters seem to have personality instead of only having mindless sex

Really like the Character Design.
Cool Concept but could be boring after a while if it would be just like this.
also nice that the MC doesn't seem to be the typical Notgeiler Loser/Douche.

reminds me of "welcome to breeding city" but a bit more realistic, i like the fact that even dou the girls are in the program, they are not fucking on the middle of the street, but maybe that can be added, when the story progress, the people become more bold as an advertisement of the program

I really like the story! Would love if you lean very much in the "public sex" direction

Fun Plot, like the idea of it being a semi open world design where you exist in a bunch of hub worlds and get to choose to "date" the different girls, use the money to buy more stuff for interesting sex scenes and use maybe some dating game mechanics to unlock specific scenarios? (ferris wheel sex, threesomes, gangbangs, bondage, pet play) with more intense kinks being locked behind building relationships with the different girls.

Will play this in the future!

Pretty good idea !

It's an odd premise but I've seen this kind of story before and it can be done well.

Playing the demo was fun albeit a bit short, but it was amusing and I appreciated the mc was not a hyper-horny fool, he was not blind to how attractive the first client was, but also under pressure and not a super confident sex god who did his fist "job" to perfection on the first try.

This is fun and I would like to see more, as long as the character interactions remain interesting and things get nicely more complex over time.

Hmm, the visual novel is fine, but I have a thought: what if this visual novel will focus on both Kat's and Jake's perspectives, using either of the sex pass to have sex with strangers, with Jake having sex with some women from the sex pass while Kat tries to interact and have sex with males until the last half Kat and Jake meet, have sex, and admit their love for each other, becoming the right couple.


Also, what if you make a similar visual novel like this one, but it involves a voluntary male and female, both naked, to have sex with strangers to relieve their stress until they meet each other and have sex with each other? Maybe it has an exhibitionism and sex theme, perhaps with a brothel setting but with everyone naked. 

Also what if you make lesbian exhibitionism visual novel  game between a milf and a college girl who were doing exhibitionism naked together and have lesbian sex

And what if there were a female-only fighting game but with a nudist or strip theme?

I think this is a really cool idea for a VN.  I also liked the pay discrepancy since the women have to run the risk of getting pregnant whenever they say yes.  The men only have to pump and dump. I think it would be a good idea to be able to increase your pay based on how popular you are and how likely you are to get women pregnant naturally, and so on. Doing things to stay healthy can increase your pay if you're consistent.

Nice idea

i feel like instead of a vn this would have insane potential to be a sort of simulation game where you can have sex with different women using minigames or something and use the money you gain to buff stats to get better at sex and raise the time limit

The story is a premise used in other games, but it lacks a lot of factors I would need for buy in. (Though I do very much appreciate that everyone is a willing participant in this game, as others are very non consensual)

- Our main character's life sucks, but somehow thinks this app is a pain, and not the greatest thing to ever happen to him? While I enjoy the twist because him being happy is how other games would handle this topic, there is not enough reason given for why he would feel antagonistic about the app at first. Perhaps it is explained that the app will fine him for not accepting requests, or there is a quota that must be reached? Things that would complicate the situation. To motivate him, perhaps there is a massive bonus for completing the beta test, life changing money if he can just survive the beta test?

- The current process is slow, ok I can buy that, but why is our main character on the beta list? There are likely thousands of people who would be WILLING to do this, so why him?The classic answer is the government cares less about quality and more about results. He is genetically more virile, so they want him on the job rather than other men. Which also makes him counter productive to the women who just want the money and not to actually get pregnant. Which helps explain a lot of the hostility towards him present in the story.

- Why is there a time limit and how does the app even know? ( Minor things because this is fantasy, but I was just asking myself these questions the whole time. ) It seems trivial to just not accept the invite and wait to move to a better location. Perhaps have the government send the invite for them, and both must accept within a time limit or the offer vanishes. This would put them on a timer and force hasty and risky decisions and would make sense as the government only cares about boosting the birth rate, not their convenience.

- some of the writing felt awkward at some points, but this is a demo, so that is fine.

- this is advertised as a visual novel, and not a kinetic novel, so the lack of player input or choice threw me off. Choosing to agree on the app seems like the logical option, especially if paired with a quote that must be hit or game over.

Overall, I enjoyed previous games, and look forward to seeing where this one goes.

I like the artstyle and women

the premise is interesting, but i dont like the way the programm and his interaction is introdouced. Meybe have him subscribe after seeing an app. hes bored after all he might go withit. then let a lady near him take advantage of his low score and her high score to make som money and just drop him. (you can reintrodouce her later when hes actually gonna be a daddy for some dramapoints XD)

after that you can send him out on his own volition.

just rambling thou ignor me ;b

Looks like fun

I like the concept

it’s good but short. yay!

Big fan of impreg (and pregnancy! They are different stages that occasionally get separated, so some games only have one or the other. I'd like to see both!) here, so you already had my attention from the concept.

Alright, I can see where it's going. I wouldn't kill the wimpiness, but dial it back a   bit more. It was... annoying to "hear" him complain all the time. At the least I hope his confidence improves and he's not another one-note semi-limp dick-haver who's just there to get used and get off. Of course, it's the beginning of the story, so I'm not really ragging on the character too much until I can see more of it, I'm just a bit tired of the character trope. He can still be nice - I like that trait, defo not a sadist here - but it always comes with a basically-in-tatters sense of worth. 

Saw a similar comment down below that I agree on a part with: the impreg x-ray is a heavy must have; the moment of conception is very hot!

Now, depending on whether it's a pure visual novel or one of those sandbox games: being able to improve your virility would be nice. Seems like a setting where you climb the ranks, improving your worth and all that jazz, so it seems interesting!

And hey, if the story's good that's like a HUGE plus for me to come back several times rather than whack it and sack it, moving on. So take care and develop your world with respect, not that I doubt you're able to do so.

(This one's more personal, but if we can make the netori part optional? I see that's a possibility from Madison's character description and I'm not much of a fan of stepping through someone else's relationship unless they were an absolute dick and their partner deserved someone better. And hey, ain't saying it's me, but it's also not hard to be better than a douchebag.)


Currently, I see this version completely as a pure concept - this demo section defo needs to be fleshed out more in order to feel more compelling. I can read super fast, but I still went through it like lightning! The story hits all the notes, but it doesn't really stand and develop them that much until you get to the first lay - which pretty much was just focused on physical attributes. I can't give strong advice in that regard, I'm no writer, and with stuff like this it's more challenging than going "dick go in there, women swoon, guy fulfilled."

But yeah, that part comes with the "this is a concept" remark, so feel free to not think about that section.


Overall, very promising idea! Looking forward to it and your team's progress!

I like the setting but feels a bit awkward for now like maybe if Jake was more into the program and knew of the pass (it's hard to get because the goverment must make through background checks) but the gym incident makes him really undestand how much of for lack of a better description "charmless goon" he is at the moment

A few things:

1. Seeing the lil' fertilization bubbe when we're successful would be nice.

2. A variety of reactions to an attempted breeding would be neat. Maybe one girl's enthusiastic, another's just horny, another only gets into it when we dom them, some of them continue past the alloted time. Power dynamic stuff as a whole would be nice - spanking, handcuffs, leashes...

3. Sex with them after they're knocked up.

4. A variety of poses. Standing Splits, the lady riding as her tits are cropped and she plays a role in her own breeding, mating press, strappado, two ladies 69’ing as they get bred, positions with deeper meanings or that are puns

5. Expanding on the character. Powers, characterization, their dreams outside of just the breeding

6. Heels barely hanging on or getting flung off from the throes of passion… I like women being barefoot and preggers too lmao... though I think that being saved for one lady and the rest keeping up with their lives even when preggers would be best.

7. Leg warmers/stockings, short shorts combo'd with oversized tops, harem pants combo'd with tight tops, sarongs, suits, and sheath dresses are all incredibly hot.

8. womb tatts, chokers, and nipple piercings are really hot too

9. vibrators and dildos stuffed into pussies that aren’t currently “in use”. 

10. honestly, going deep into the worldbuilding could be really fun. Like, how has the government improved life for mothers? Why is increasing immigration to counteract low birthrates not an option? Has the government started making breeding porn?

11. Let's see some of your previous characters here! I'd fucking LOVE to breed Candace, Jennifer, or one of Queen and co's descendants!


Thoughts?

Concept is good, the story and arts are great as always

wondeful concept, but no chubby girl :(

Although the concept might be cliche,but seem promising if done right ,tho need to knew how the mechanic of it's first to have a say on its